Week 9
Feedback frenzy (29/03/21 - 02/04/21)
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Feedback frenzy (29/03/21 - 02/04/21)
Last updated
This week i didn't have spare time to do the CCDL exercises (a workshop from Hans Rosling) but nevertheless i included his ted talk in my documentation because it contains some valuable lessons.
This week there were meetings scheduled for feedback. Multiple students (8) prepared a presentation. In this presentation we pitched our projects in about 5 minutes. After these 5 minutes we were asked to be very precise about the feedback we wanted to receive.
Below you see the three versions/sketches i discussed during the presentation. At the end i asked what part(s) and/or version they found the best.
When you click on the link below you can view the below you can see my presentation and the virtual feedback post-its i received.
A quick impression of our feedback frenzy
My feedback
After receiving all the feedback i planned to collect the pos it's so i can gain insight from them.
For every 'feedback question' i asked i made a different section. These questions and answers are all in dutch so below every screenshot i'll summarized the main insights i gained.
Concept 1 is popular because the subject is best explained when there's a broader view. The best part op concept 2 is the very clear comparison between man and women's physical bodies. The level of detail is the best part of concept 3.
These three points combined is the best option for a solid concept.
I asked what they found the best parts of all three the concepts. The use of quotes and data comics were very popular. Besides that they liked the introduction of concept 1 and the visual way of telling the story.
The questions they put on post-its weren't really questions but remarks. Not anything valuable cam from these.
I asked if they preferred a more broad way of giving examples or a more specific one. You can see that the opinions about this were very divergent. A combination is what seems best.
The last question i asked for tips. I received a lot of them. I am going to summarize the most important/valuable ones below
Use the circles in a more spatial context as well, now it's still a bit random
Explore options on how to make the examples 'live' in one of your concepts you include a wall but there are more options (like a (doll)house experience)
Look at your current concept with a different perspective (adapt your examples to a man's point of view)
Make the data strip more interactive
Already explore options on how to showcase your project
Animations might work better than static images
Categorize the circles with the examples
Engage cultures in your examples
Maybe implement humor to make it a bit more light
Check if you can engage your audience by letting them give input
All of this information can be used to make my next iteration a better concept.
During the week Shani texted me the image below.
I immediately recognized all of the examples given in the image above. The way they illustrated them can be a big inspiration for my own project.
In week 9 i mainly focused on my presentation for the feedback frenzy. After giving the presentation and receiving the feedback i concluded some insights. Next week i am going to transform my sketches and ideas in a more final project and start making the first version of my project.
