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description: Feedback frenzy (29/03/21 - 02/04/21)
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# Week 9

## CCDL Information & Tips

This week i didn't have spare time to do the CCDL exercises (a workshop from Hans Rosling) but nevertheless i included his ted talk in my documentation because it contains some valuable lessons.

### Ted talk | Hans Rosling

{% embed url="https://www.ted.com/talks/hans_rosling_the_best_stats_you_ve_ever_seen" %}

### Tableau visualisation tool links

{% embed url="https://www.tableau.com/" %}

{% embed url="https://www.tableau.com/academic/students" %}

## Feedback Frenzy

This week there were meetings scheduled for feedback. Multiple students (8) prepared a presentation. In this presentation we pitched our projects in about 5 minutes. After these 5 minutes we were asked to be very precise about the feedback we wanted to receive.&#x20;

Below you see the three versions/sketches i discussed during the presentation. At the end i asked what part(s) and/or version they found the best.

![](https://2269634644-files.gitbook.io/~/files/v0/b/gitbook-legacy-files/o/assets%2F-MSXyFrHaFxhHbbeVqPW%2F-MWy8InMgWzM3aia0c5p%2F-MXXkB3kWOkyplmHqDNJ%2F1.png?alt=media\&token=6148e5f5-90b5-4d31-b06d-b0e8d5b9116b)

![](https://2269634644-files.gitbook.io/~/files/v0/b/gitbook-legacy-files/o/assets%2F-MSXyFrHaFxhHbbeVqPW%2F-MWy8InMgWzM3aia0c5p%2F-MXXkE5KJp9eOeB06FkW%2F2.png?alt=media\&token=db38d070-9b11-4905-af07-0d57a0ee2a30)

![](https://2269634644-files.gitbook.io/~/files/v0/b/gitbook-legacy-files/o/assets%2F-MSXyFrHaFxhHbbeVqPW%2F-MWy8InMgWzM3aia0c5p%2F-MXXkHIg_o1HE3xEIUyn%2F3.png?alt=media\&token=ee9a3d08-b353-4b75-ad2f-07000dcd7d13)

### Miro board

When you click on the link below you can view the below you can see my presentation and the virtual feedback post-its i received.

{% embed url="https://miro.com/app/board/o9J_lNMF2_A=/" %}

_A quick impression of our feedback frenzy_

![](https://2269634644-files.gitbook.io/~/files/v0/b/gitbook-legacy-files/o/assets%2F-MSXyFrHaFxhHbbeVqPW%2F-MWy8InMgWzM3aia0c5p%2F-MXXjRWokvQWgaT9zRVl%2FSchermafbeelding%202021-04-05%20om%2017.52.21.png?alt=media\&token=599475e1-026d-4ca1-bb53-7c0a191abfb7)

My feedback

![](https://2269634644-files.gitbook.io/~/files/v0/b/gitbook-legacy-files/o/assets%2F-MSXyFrHaFxhHbbeVqPW%2F-MWy8InMgWzM3aia0c5p%2F-MXXjN80D8RBFNSy6wiK%2FSchermafbeelding%202021-04-05%20om%2017.53.39.png?alt=media\&token=80691eb3-a286-41cd-af8b-3f13b4cd4188)

After receiving all the feedback i planned to collect the pos it's so i can gain insight from them.

### Insights

For every 'feedback question' i asked i made a different section. These questions and answers are all in dutch so below every screenshot i'll summarized the main insights i gained.

![](https://2269634644-files.gitbook.io/~/files/v0/b/gitbook-legacy-files/o/assets%2F-MSXyFrHaFxhHbbeVqPW%2F-MXXkOE145GitGVzQ-GE%2F-MXabj5JmzezkVRRhg-D%2FSchermafbeelding%202021-04-06%20om%2010.52.14.png?alt=media\&token=529bd1b5-3a02-4548-bea9-d3f4384036ae)

**Concept 1** is popular because the subject is best explained when there's a broader view. \
The best part op **concept 2** is the very clear comparison between man and women's physical bodies. The level of detail is the best part of concept 3.

These three points **combined** is the best option for a solid concept.

![](https://2269634644-files.gitbook.io/~/files/v0/b/gitbook-legacy-files/o/assets%2F-MSXyFrHaFxhHbbeVqPW%2F-MXXkOE145GitGVzQ-GE%2F-MXabmdFyIh8r9gf15kw%2FSchermafbeelding%202021-04-06%20om%2011.44.08.png?alt=media\&token=3d50750a-7967-4e89-a465-4832facfa691)

I asked what they found the best parts of all three the concepts. The use of **quotes** and **data comics** were very popular. Besides that they liked the **introduction** of concept 1 and the **visual** way of telling the story.

![](https://2269634644-files.gitbook.io/~/files/v0/b/gitbook-legacy-files/o/assets%2F-MSXyFrHaFxhHbbeVqPW%2F-MXXkOE145GitGVzQ-GE%2F-MXabqWOZGCLh3JVXZHL%2FSchermafbeelding%202021-04-06%20om%2011.51.01.png?alt=media\&token=0beabfcc-ff69-4dda-8efe-89d55fb2bd7b)

The questions they put on post-its weren't really questions but **remarks**. Not anything valuable cam from these.

![](https://2269634644-files.gitbook.io/~/files/v0/b/gitbook-legacy-files/o/assets%2F-MSXyFrHaFxhHbbeVqPW%2F-MXXkOE145GitGVzQ-GE%2F-MXabvXxfEQ0WEDMLvX6%2FSchermafbeelding%202021-04-06%20om%2011.58.39.png?alt=media\&token=35b626e7-f51e-460e-820d-e53969651457)

I asked if they preferred a more broad way of giving examples or a more specific one. You can see that the opinions about this were very divergent. A **combination** is what seems best.

![](https://2269634644-files.gitbook.io/~/files/v0/b/gitbook-legacy-files/o/assets%2F-MSXyFrHaFxhHbbeVqPW%2F-MXXkOE145GitGVzQ-GE%2F-MXajjqwSxfH6z0rVzNl%2FSchermafbeelding%202021-04-06%20om%2012.33.47.png?alt=media\&token=816d6d9d-ade6-4f84-a85e-3240506ea55d)

The last question i asked for tips. I received a lot of them. I am going to summarize the most important/valuable ones below

* _Use the circles in a more spatial context as well, now it's still a bit random_
* _Explore options on how to make the examples 'live' in one of your concepts you include a wall but there are more options (like a (doll)house experience)_
* _Look at your current concept with a different perspective (adapt your examples to a man's point of view)_
* _Make the data strip more interactive_
* _Already explore options on how to showcase your project_&#x20;
* _Animations might work better than static images_
* _Categorize the circles with the examples_
* _Engage cultures in your examples_
* _Maybe implement humor to make it a bit more light_
* _Check if you can engage your audience by letting them give input_

All of this information can be used to make my next iteration a better concept.

## Input from Shani (CCDL)

During the week Shani texted me the image below.

![](https://2269634644-files.gitbook.io/~/files/v0/b/gitbook-legacy-files/o/assets%2F-MSXyFrHaFxhHbbeVqPW%2F-MXXkOE145GitGVzQ-GE%2F-MXbbffuQVdyibG3meiV%2FWhatsApp%20Image%202021-03-31%20at%2018.12.27.jpeg?alt=media\&token=1e5e710f-0e35-46e5-9450-b8cfd7e4b845)

I immediately recognized all of the examples given in the image above. The way they illustrated them can be **a big inspiration** for my own project. &#x20;

## Conclusion week 9

In week 9 i mainly focused on my presentation for the **feedback frenzy**. After giving the presentation and receiving the feedback i concluded some insights. Next week i am going to transform my sketches and ideas in a more final project and start making the first version of my project.
